First Comes Like, by Alisha Rai
May. 30th, 2021 05:09 pmA perfectly fine book but I don't like it as much as some of Alisha Rai's others.
As always, her books are romance novels that also place significant weight on the importance of other family/friend relationships in her characters' lives, which is something I love about her works. And that's definitely the case in this one! I love all the various family/friends dynamics, and I like both the lead characters.
But it all felt a little too contrived for me, I think. A certain amount of contrivance is fine, even expected, in romance. And I even really enjoy contrivance if there's a worldbuilding reason for it to make sense (eg in SGA fanfic, Ancient devices can cause contrivances all they want and I just nod my head and go, "yup, checks out"). But in this book....idk, it just felt like a lot, which made me feel more distant from the growth of the romantic relationship that I would otherwise have enjoyed reading about.
Also, the ending really didn't work for me; I don't feel like there's enough work done to show to the reader that they're actually on the same page about their relationship (and that they KNOW they're on the same page about their relationship) before they're suddenly married and heading to their HEA! So I was annoyed instead of cheering them on. I think they could be a really good couple! I Want To Believe! But you gotta GIVE me something to work with here! Sigh.
Oh well. It was still a basically enjoyable read, even if I had my frustrations with it. Even when Rai is off her game, her writing still has a baseline skill level and sense of priorities that mean she can't go TOO far off the rails for me.
As always, her books are romance novels that also place significant weight on the importance of other family/friend relationships in her characters' lives, which is something I love about her works. And that's definitely the case in this one! I love all the various family/friends dynamics, and I like both the lead characters.
But it all felt a little too contrived for me, I think. A certain amount of contrivance is fine, even expected, in romance. And I even really enjoy contrivance if there's a worldbuilding reason for it to make sense (eg in SGA fanfic, Ancient devices can cause contrivances all they want and I just nod my head and go, "yup, checks out"). But in this book....idk, it just felt like a lot, which made me feel more distant from the growth of the romantic relationship that I would otherwise have enjoyed reading about.
Also, the ending really didn't work for me; I don't feel like there's enough work done to show to the reader that they're actually on the same page about their relationship (and that they KNOW they're on the same page about their relationship) before they're suddenly married and heading to their HEA! So I was annoyed instead of cheering them on. I think they could be a really good couple! I Want To Believe! But you gotta GIVE me something to work with here! Sigh.
Oh well. It was still a basically enjoyable read, even if I had my frustrations with it. Even when Rai is off her game, her writing still has a baseline skill level and sense of priorities that mean she can't go TOO far off the rails for me.